9 Comments so far

1.    James D on November 26, 2008 12:59 am

   That was a really well read story and it was cool!!!!!!!! :)

2.    marybankblog on November 26, 2008 1:00 am

   well done christopher!!!!

   Iain M

3.    megan on November 26, 2008 4:21 am

   Really good and well read out

4.    marybankblog on November 26, 2008 4:24 am

   It was a great story he said it went rong but its exelent

   from Kyra***

5.    marybankblog on November 26, 2008 4:30 am

   exelent story cris i hope i here another story like that

6.    Rory on November 27, 2008 1:05 am

   well down Chris

7.    Caitlin on November 27, 2008 5:43 am

   I really liked the story and excellent reading.

8.    Gregor =] on November 27, 2008 5:44 am

   well done kippy i like the jail bit 2 years =]

9.    Ryan on December 10, 2008 1:07 am

   I think you have a spectacular story and i think everyone else thought that to.