3 Comments so far

1.    Louise M on April 22, 2008 11:45 am

   Hi Megan your story was absolutely brilliant and you definitely reached the targets we had in writing …x

   keep it up …x

   Louise…x x x

2.    marybankblog on April 23, 2008 12:22 pm

   Well done for this excellent story starter Megan which set a really scary and creepy mood. This type of start to a story definitely makes your readers want to read on to find out what exciting events are going to happen next…

   Mrs McClelland

3.    marybankblog on April 24, 2008 9:51 am

   This was great Megan! You have read this really well and with great expression. Keep it up!
   Mr Quigley