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P5-7 Poems Which Explore Our Senses!
January 21, 2008 | | 23 Comments
P5-7 have been writing poems which describe an emotion using all the senses. Their imaginations have certainly been fizzing.
Enjoy and be inspired
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Sadness
Sadness is grey like the sky before rainfall
sadness sounds like the wind whining through the narrow trees
Sadness feels like someone has kicked you in the stomach
Sadness looks like a starving puppy left under the stairs
Sadness tastes like a sour lemon
Sadness reminds me of the dullest day there could be
Zoe
Excitement
Excitement is as pink as a kitten’s tongue licking the last drop of milk from its bowl
Excitement feels like a silky soft blanket with frayed ends
Excitement tastes like cherry coke and fizzy cola bottles mixed together
Excitement sounds like whizzing fireworks in a bat black sky
Excitement looks like a dog doing a handstand
Excitement smells like the after smell of perfume in the sun
Excitement reminds me of ripping open all my presents on Christmas Day
Lauren
Hate
Hate is red like a red devil
Hate smells like rotten flesh
Hate looks like green slime
Hate tastes like bitter grapes
Hate feels like a shiver down your back
Hate sounds like the unwanted and horrible
Hate reminds me of all that is ghastly and rotten
Ashleigh
Surpise
Surprise is orange like a sun set fading in the summer sky
Surprise sounds like a jumping cricket
Surprise tastes like space dust crackling in your mouth
Surprise smells like the sweetness of chocolate
Surprise looks like a spinning Catherine wheel
Surprise feels like a nice hot sun tan
Surprise reminds me of a roaring fire!
Emma
Diappointment
Disappointment is red like a bowl of lava
It looks like an abandoned calm sea
Disappointment sounds like a quiet house at night
Disappointment smells like a burnt piece of toast
Disappointment tastes like an old rotten and poisonous banana
Disappointment feels like being in a fight because no one likes you
Disappointment reminds me of a cancelled flight and a missed holiday
Christopher
Worry
Worry is grey like a silver fish
Worry smells like a rotten banana
Worry sounds like teeth chattering
Worry looks like wide open eyes
Worry tastes like medicine for a bad illness
Worry feels like you have chicken pox all over your body
Worry reminds me of being out at Hallowe’en and someone is trying to take all your sweeties
Caitlin
Hunger
Hunger is brown like a chocolate bar
Hunger tastes like a fizzy cola drink
Hunger sounds like a gurgling belly
Hunger looks like a roaring lion
Hunger smells like a chicken curry warming in a hot oven
Hunger reminds me why I like to eat!
Megan
Anger
Anger is red like a red devil
It feels like being in a pan over a roaring fire
It smells like burning toast
It tastes liked rotten squished bananas
It sounds like volcanoes erupting, spilling lava all over the earth
Anger reminds me of an explosion!
Iain M.
Excitement
Excitement is pink like a freshly picked peach
Excitement looks like a firework, exploding in the night sky
Excitement smells like a fresh fruit smoothie
Excitement feels like bubble in a bubble bath
Excitement tastes like chocolate, melting on your tongue
Excitement sounds like balloons popping
Excitement reminds me of being on a roller coaster, circling in the air!
Leonie
Fear
Fear is black like a big bat flapping in a cave
Fear sounds like a roaring lion
Fear looks like a big bad bully
Fear smells like the sweat of a rampaging bull
Fear feels like trembling feet running away
Fear tastes like a poisonous pie left lying on a table
Fear reminds me of my cold dark cellar
Andrew
Cold
Cold is as blue as the Scottish flag
Cold sounds like the roaring wind
Cold feels like a crunchy ice cube
Cold tastes like the ‘brain-freeze’ you get from ice cream
Cold looks like Jack Frost on a winter’s night
Cold smells like a melting icicle
Cold reminds me of a never-ending winter
Louise
Tiredness
Tiredness is dark green like a turtle’s shell
Tiredness tastes like fresh milk
Tiredness smells like sour gobstoppers
Tiredness sound like a baby yawning
Tiredness feels like you have no energy
Tiredness looks like you are exhausted
Tiredness reminds me of my bed!
Cameron
Jealousy
Jealousy is red like blood
Jealousy feels like sick from a goblin
Jealousy looks like squished bananas
Jealousy smells like rotten medicine
Jealousy tastes like mouldy fish
Jealousy reminds me of someone else getting the last World Cup Final ticket!
James
Fantastic poems! I love how imaginative you have been with your descriptions.
Mr Quigley
The poems are really good and i liked how we had to pick a word out of the pot.
Wow! Some fantastic descriptions. I really like the lines ‘Fear feels like trembling feet running away’ and
‘Hunger sounds like a gurgling belly’. Good work P5-7.
Happiness
Happiness is yellow like the morning sun
Happiness sounds like laughter in the school playground
Happiness smells like a summer rose
Happiness looks like a joyful smile
Happiness feels like a trip to France
Happiness tastes like a juicy apple
Happiness reminds me of playing in the summertime!
Fun!
Fun is yellow like sunflowers
Fun tastes like lemonade fizzing in your mouth
Fun feels like excitement in your belly
Fun smells like lavender in your body
Fun looks like an amazing disco
Fun sounds like noises in your stomach
Fun reminds me of parties and discos!
Nice poems, wonder if they’ev got anything to do with the people who wrote them.
Interesting comment Marsaili but not true I’m afraid because everyone picked their title out of a hat!
Mrs McClelland
i think that the poems p5-7 are exelent and they are very discriptive. i liked the how blue sounds like the roaring wind.
=] good work everyone!!!
all the poems are great realy good :]
All of the poems are fab and well done for coming up with lots of ideas